I was nervous as my feet touch the hard ground my arms was shaking as I was getting used to it I put a flag down to remember I was there
Tuesday, December 31, 2019
Summer Learning Journey Day 2 ACT 2 One Small Step for Man
Act 2:One Small Step for Man
I was nervous as my feet touch the hard ground my arms was shaking as I was getting used to it I put a flag down to remember I was there
I was nervous as my feet touch the hard ground my arms was shaking as I was getting used to it I put a flag down to remember I was there
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Kia ora Liam, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteWell done on creating this poem about being Neil Armstrong on the moon! You really envisioned yourself as an astronaut and this has resulted in a great poem!
Have you ever imagined what it would be like to walk on the moon with no gravity?
I imagine that it would be the same feeling you get when you walk through water. It feels light, yet heavy at the same time, and it seems as though you could just float away, yet you are still weighed down.
You mentioned in your poem that you were nervous as your feet touched the hard ground. Why would you be nervous? It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know!
If you ever got the chance to go into space, would you go?
What kinds of things would you pack on a space trip?
Quick Tip- Perhaps you could draw a picture of this moon landing and upload it to your blog post. It would add a lovely pop of colour to your post, and reiterate the idea of the moon landing to your readers.
Nga mihi