Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, June 4, 2020
The Email
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Liam
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you sharing your learning on your blog. Well done!
I like the way that you have embedded the slide on your blog - it makes your work more visually appealing for your reader. You have also added in many good points around the correct way to write an email.
Next time, don't forget to add in your learning goal.
Thanks,
Mrs Carney